The Dragon and The Ring Elizabeth silently turned the silver ring over in her hand, thinking silently about her home. She had found this ring on the store of the Grocery Store floor. The man who had initially stolen the ring walked up to her; his rolls of fat made it hard for him to move quickly at all. He stared down at the Asian girl, looking into her strangely colored ice-blue eyes. She pushed her snow white hair away from her face to meet his beady brown-eyed stare. Feeling as if she was defying him in some way, his eyes narrowed in aggravation and he shifted his weight from one large leg to another. It looked as if his legs would snap if much more weight were added to either one of them. His white shirt barely seemed to hold him, showing the last roll of his stomach while his pants tried to reach up to cover it. He ran his fat fingers through his thick curly hair, trying to seem intimidating and yet laid back. "You have something of
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