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January 13, 2012
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:iconshesabromide:
~ShesABromide Feb 17, 2012
This is quite lovely, I really like all the cool colours :la:
Interesting contrast between the sharp lettering and the soft clouds in the backdrop. Very nice cover :meow:
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=SolarLunix Feb 24, 2012   General Artist
Thanks, now I just need to make the letters pop more... maybe a red color lining or something... hmmmm choices choices.
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=merrak Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Not bad at all :)

It took me a while to figure out exactly what you were doing with this. I had to hunt all over your profile to figure it out. I'm assuming I figured it out correctly - that this is for the lit deviations. If that's wrong - a more descriptive artist comment would help you get more appropriate feedback ;)

I'm only going into this much detail because you have the critique requested option up. I don't have enough to say to merit a full critique, but here are some thoughts if you're interested.

For a lit tag I think you have the right idea - a simpler design that is sure to render correctly - with enough flair to grab some attention. In this case the lettering draws my attention. As was mentioned a couple of times, the lettering is a bit difficult to read. The font itself is neat - but the coloring could be tweaked to make it stand out more. The font on your byline seems a bit odd... probably because it is such a conservative font placed with the much more elaborate title. As a lit tag, it is also much too small (at least on my display) to read. Other than that, I think it's an effective design.
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=SolarLunix Mar 11, 2012   General Artist
Sorry it took so long to responding, thanks for your comments and ideas.
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:iconellocabruja:
~ELLOCABRUJA Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very cool
looks great but that lettering needs to pop more
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=SolarLunix Feb 16, 2012   General Artist
So it seems, thanks for the advice
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~AmayaElls Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a good cover for a work that will be purely online, it looks good in small format and as a thumb. One suggestion I have though is that currently the font is hard to read when it is a thumb, thus using it as a preview for your lit may make it hard to tell what the story is called when it is in someone's message centre.
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:iconsolarlunix:
=SolarLunix Feb 16, 2012   General Artist
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll work on that.
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:iconamayaells:
~AmayaElls Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome.
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~AndreasRullmann-St Jan 13, 2012
I remember, some time ago you posted the first drawn pcture with the triangular frame, right? And I think, you had to change age of the protagonists. And there was somewhere a link to a much older version. So I think, it's a long term-work. You made the cover with a program on your PC, I guess.
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