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January 13, 2012
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Fallen Angel Cover by SolarLunix Fallen Angel Cover by SolarLunix
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ShesABromide Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
This is quite lovely, I really like all the cool colours :la:
Interesting contrast between the sharp lettering and the soft clouds in the backdrop. Very nice cover :meow:
SolarLunix Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks, now I just need to make the letters pop more... maybe a red color lining or something... hmmmm choices choices.
merrak Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Not bad at all :)

It took me a while to figure out exactly what you were doing with this. I had to hunt all over your profile to figure it out. I'm assuming I figured it out correctly - that this is for the lit deviations. If that's wrong - a more descriptive artist comment would help you get more appropriate feedback ;)

I'm only going into this much detail because you have the critique requested option up. I don't have enough to say to merit a full critique, but here are some thoughts if you're interested.

For a lit tag I think you have the right idea - a simpler design that is sure to render correctly - with enough flair to grab some attention. In this case the lettering draws my attention. As was mentioned a couple of times, the lettering is a bit difficult to read. The font itself is neat - but the coloring could be tweaked to make it stand out more. The font on your byline seems a bit odd... probably because it is such a conservative font placed with the much more elaborate title. As a lit tag, it is also much too small (at least on my display) to read. Other than that, I think it's an effective design.
SolarLunix Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
Sorry it took so long to responding, thanks for your comments and ideas.
ELLOCABRUJA Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very cool
looks great but that lettering needs to pop more
SolarLunix Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012   Traditional Artist
So it seems, thanks for the advice
AmayaElls Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a good cover for a work that will be purely online, it looks good in small format and as a thumb. One suggestion I have though is that currently the font is hard to read when it is a thumb, thus using it as a preview for your lit may make it hard to tell what the story is called when it is in someone's message centre.
SolarLunix Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll work on that.
AmayaElls Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome.
AndreasRullmann-St Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
I remember, some time ago you posted the first drawn pcture with the triangular frame, right? And I think, you had to change age of the protagonists. And there was somewhere a link to a much older version. So I think, it's a long term-work. You made the cover with a program on your PC, I guess.
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