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Careful thoughts and many words
    my pen and I do weave,
from the shadows, from the depths,
    the darkness told to me.
Darkness growing ever closer,
    as the time goes by...
I stay awake to keep away
    the darkened dreams that rise.
Dreams are the gateway to a world unknown.

Peace~
~Solar
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:icondreamscape195:
This is spectacular. "Dreams are the gateway to a world unknown," even that is fabulous :D

Kind of makes me want to go read some Stephen King.... or just go to bed :XD:
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SolarLunix Apr 25, 2013   Traditional Artist
lol the first one sounds more fun. I love Stephen King... but only when I have time to finish the whole book.
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Indeed ;p My favorites are Lisey's Story, Insomnia, and the Dark Towers series I think.
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SolarLunix Apr 27, 2013   Traditional Artist
I don't really have any favorites.... although I did like the dark half or something like that... I don't remember exactly what it was called.
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:icondreamscape195:
Hmmm, doesn't sound familiar, but I'll probably end up looking it up :D

I think the reason I like the ones I listed so much is that I feel a sort of kinship with the author when I read them. I really get the feeling he has the same sort of vivid dreams that I get sometimes; they all have that feeling of being based on dreams.
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SolarLunix Apr 28, 2013   Traditional Artist
I honestly could've gotten it mixed up...

A lot of inspiration comes from dreams from what I understand... and only the most creative people have dreams that are based on something other than themselves or what they know.
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melancholymourning Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the ending a lot. Some of it seemed a little repetitive and I wish it was a bit longer to fit in more substance. I could tell your emotions though and that's the real meaning behind writing, in my opinion. Good job. c:
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SolarLunix Apr 9, 2013   Traditional Artist
It was a little repetitive, but honestly it felt like it was supposed to be. I wanted to keep going with it, but I'm not quite sure how to continue.

:blackrose: Thanks :heart:
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melancholymourning Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'd love to read it again, if you do. c:
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SolarLunix Apr 11, 2013   Traditional Artist
mkay, I'll think about it.
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