Careful thoughts and many words my pen and I do weave, from the shadows, from the depths, the darkness told to me. Darkness growing ever closer, as the time goes by... I stay awake to keep away the darkened dreams that rise.
Hmmm, doesn't sound familiar, but I'll probably end up looking it up
I think the reason I like the ones I listed so much is that I feel a sort of kinship with the author when I read them. I really get the feeling he has the same sort of vivid dreams that I get sometimes; they all have that feeling of being based on dreams.
I like the ending a lot. Some of it seemed a little repetitive and I wish it was a bit longer to fit in more substance. I could tell your emotions though and that's the real meaning behind writing, in my opinion. Good job. c: