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Requester: supremeX2

supremeX2 requested strongly that I should do art for him, and then told me to do something that makes me happy. Well, this is what came, it is a picture of Nuada and Jacobie together :love:
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Critique by CaiBurton Apr 5, 2013, 5:12:41 AM
This is really good! :D I like that you've done it in a manga/realistic style, which works well! :) Plus, i like that its not your average drawing, you've got the different border which works very well! :D it gives the image an original feel to it! :) Also, i can see that you've started to add some shading and colour to it! :3 I feel that it represents the theme you mentioned well too! :D

So onto some improvements..
To improve the technique, i would use more shading and colour to add something to it! That would also help with the impact too, to make it stand out more!! Also, try drawing it a bit bigger! That will mean that you can add more detail! This would make it a lot easier! X)
To improve the technique, all i can suggest is to practice!! :D Start working on adding colour and shading to it, but stay true to your style! :D Its looking good already though! :)

But yeah! X)
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Kaotic-Cass Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Student Traditional Artist

Hello, I’m here from ProjectComment.

 

This is a really cute image, it has a lot of great emotion and thought put into it. I really enjoy the splash of blue in the background and the shape of the image, instead of relaying on the square piece of paper. It makes it more interesting for the eye to look at.

 

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My first suggest is to add some more contrast to the image. Even if you want a lighter feel to the picture, it’s still important to put deep, medium, and light shadows in the image to add depth to your characters. The other advice I can give is to work on your anatomy some more. While the position is looks good, the arm is a little too long on the boy and his eyes are not quite even.

 

I hope this was helpful, keep up the great work. :D

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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Professional General Artist
Yeah, I do really need to work on anatomy here. And I will add more contrast to my future works. It seems to be the biggest thing that is the issue with most of my works. Thanks for the advice. I'm really glad that you like it!

I don't really like sticking to square any more after going through my first beginning drawing class. 
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Kaotic-Cass Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I wish you luck with your future drawings. :) I'm glad I could help.

That's the sad thing about art classes, especially beginning ones in high school. (I don't know what grade level you're in, I've already been through college XD) Art classes take important things and passionate artists and make it almost unbearable.
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Professional General Artist
Actually, you read that wrong. It wasn't a sad thing, this is the art class that made me try the weird shapes. This art class actually made you a better artist, and you explored your own style. He really pushed you to try new things but not in a way you hated it. I really evolved in this class, and it was amazing. 

It was a uni-level art class. 
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Kaotic-Cass Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Well, that's awesome then. :D
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Professional General Artist
:nod: It was one of the best classes I had.
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Kaotic-Cass Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I find college art classes are quite wonderful.
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Professional General Artist
It's almost because they realise that you don't HAVE to be there so they are a little more helpful 
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Fallen-Gravity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Student General Artist
Hey there! To start things off, the detail in the drawing really stands out! It adds emphasis on the shading and background, making the picture look more realistic. However, the arm of the kid is bothering me a bit. The arm, from my perspective, like a bit long. Picture the kid reaching their arm up. The arm would be long compared to the rest of the body. I suggest to shorten the upper part of the arm. It would really help you out if you're striving to improve on proportions and anatomy. I can't wait to see your other works! :D
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
It is long, and I'll definitely keep that in mind if I do another picture like this, thank you. 
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Fallen-Gravity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Student General Artist
No problem! I'm really glad it helped! I was actually worried about coming off as rude or mean. :D
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
Not at all, you were very kind about it!
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Fallen-Gravity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks! ^^
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
:D anytime
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
This works well as a piece overall and it kinda reminds me of a snapshot of a happy moment shared between these two characters :D I love the expressions on their faces as well as the concise details.
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks. I was actually going for the mum taking the picture of the two together. :) It's actually one of my favourite old drawings!
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I can see why :D
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Professional General Artist
Your'e so nice :D
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and you too :D 
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kyrtuck Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks cute!
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much. :love:
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Moltenkitty Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016   General Artist
That's sweet :love:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Professional General Artist
:blushes: thank you :D
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Moltenkitty Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016   General Artist
You're welcome <3
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admx Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
This is really great, it clearly shows that it's emotive, but in subtle way, if that makes sense.
totally love this style, keep it up! :huggle:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
I really love this picture honestly. I can't wait to write about this scene... Nuada and Jacobie. It's going to be a flashback in Magic Notions if I can help it. Like a dream Nuala has of Nuada.
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admx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
:aww:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
:la:
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Aliecko Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
I really like it.It's so simple but beautiful!
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
:huggle: Thank you!
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Aliecko Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
YW :]
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DanB-Graphic-and-Web Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Featured! [link] at :iconinspiredcollective:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D Thanks :huggle:
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ionakate Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
Adorable piece, really captures the emotion-- and like I said, the frame idea is so cool! :love:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
:huggle: glad you like it
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ionakate Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
that is simply the most adorable emote
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
I know right? :D :huggle: -> :huggle:
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ionakate Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
:huggle: awwww okay this is too cute, thanks for that haha! ^^
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
You must huggle everyone with your cute emote face lol
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ionakate Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
I shall go forth unto the world and huggle. *determined face* :giggle:
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
:giggle: I like you :giggle:
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BMarshallARTS Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this. The expressions are wonderful and the soft shading adds to the emotion of the moment.
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
:huggle: Thanks :heart: I worked really really hard on it.
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lechiffre17 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
aw its really cute
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
:huggle: Thanks :heart:
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Francisco-Jae Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really good! How long have you been drawing?
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
As long as I can remember. Believe it or not, I didn't use any ref pics to draw this.
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Francisco-Jae Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Now that's some talent !
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
:bow: thank you :D
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totodile-fan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cute!
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