This was today's master piece. I worked REALY hard on this. Feel free to make comments, in fact, i really would like to hear everyone's oppinion of this!
All the poems and the art i came up with today, please don't steal this, i worked REALLY hard on this.
top left: A childhood of loneliness brings about ghost to protect me and show me what friendship truely can be
Below it: Alone I call on the dead for company. I call and they listen! I'm alone no longer.
Below it: The silent call I know not I send brings them near calling my name no longer I fear, they are just friends.
Below it: Comfort comes in many forms Ghosts of those long past are my own.
Top Right: To lead a life of Sorrows
Bottom Right: These souls come to keep me company hearing my silent cries for help As the feeling of being alone Kills my heart and soul
Thanks. I was thinking about redoing this one, keeping the poems the same, but updating the art, I draw a lot better now, but I wasted A LOT of pencil on this piece coloring it in.
Technically you have improved, of course, but your work was quite expressive, nevertheless. What I always like is, when several kinds of art fit together, here drawing and poems. Maybe, I'm receptive to this, cause it correlates somehow with my own quiet and sad inner part.
Moreover, the mood reminds me of "Bringer of Darkness" and the song "Darkness" (on "Up") from Peter Gabriel - you know it? It conveys the same mood to me.
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