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To lead a life of sorrows by SolarLunix To lead a life of sorrows by SolarLunix
Quote (This was made September 28, 2009)

This was today's master piece. I worked REALY hard on this. Feel free to make comments, in fact, i really would like to hear everyone's oppinion of this!

All the poems and the art i came up with today, please don't steal this, i worked REALLY hard on this.

top left:
A childhood
of loneliness
brings about ghost
to protect me and show
me what friendship truely
can be

Below it:
Alone
I call on the dead
for company.
I call and they listen!
I'm alone no longer.

Below it:
The silent call
I know not I send
brings them near
calling my name
no longer I fear,
they are just friends.

Below it:
Comfort comes in
many forms
Ghosts of those
long past
are my own.

Top Right:
To lead a life of
Sorrows

Bottom Right:
These souls
come to keep me
company
hearing my silent
cries for help
As the feeling of
being alone
Kills my heart
and soul

All poems (c) me!
Artwork (c) me!
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01Gus01 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
I like when there is poetry to go along with a work of art. Adds depth and understanding to the artist's work, this is really great
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks. I was thinking about redoing this one, keeping the poems the same, but updating the art, I draw a lot better now, but I wasted A LOT of pencil on this piece coloring it in.
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01Gus01 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
I have drawings like this too, with lots of pencil in the background. Love to see a redo if you make one!
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robZombiefan1994 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhhhhhhh i love this one ^^
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks! I'm thinking about redoing it since it's been so long since I made this picture.
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robZombiefan1994 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait to see ^^
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AndreasRullmann-St Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Here is "Darkness" from Peter Gabriel, which I was reminded of by your art: [link]

What do you think about it? In my perception this song really lets one feel the fear.
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AndreasRullmann-St Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
Technically you have improved, of course, but your work was quite expressive, nevertheless. What I always like is, when several kinds of art fit together, here drawing and poems. Maybe, I'm receptive to this, cause it correlates somehow with my own quiet and sad inner part.

Moreover, the mood reminds me of "Bringer of Darkness" and the song "Darkness" (on "Up") from Peter Gabriel - you know it? It conveys the same mood to me.
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freakingannoying Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
aw~ it's so sad and cute on the same time. :'(
nice work. the poem is great!! :D
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SolarLunix Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks, I still can't believe how old this is, I think i've improved XD
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